Frage von Üäää Üäää: ist es so ok englisch referat?
hello
my name is ……. ……..
i´m 14 years old and my birthdate is 29 mar 1996
I come from türkey and I live in ..with my family .
I`m a studens of ,,, middel school, my favorite subjects are mahte , art , sport and german .
My family
my mum is 42 years old and works in a flower – shop , my sister is 22 years old and make training in hotel manegment and my dad is 45 and works in daimler.
i have a dog his name is jimmy , he is 4 years old and still very playfull. jimmy mast de running in the mornig and evening i hat my dog since he is bayby.
Every sommer we trauvel wiht my family in a other country we love to hike and other city to see . we were in spain italy and türkey . in Türkey live my grandperends and aunt uncle cousins.
hobbies in cluse playing tennis , reading a book and go for with my dog .
tennis
The match takes place on a tennis court. A single, we played on a smaller field, the double in the big field. The game begins with the impact. You have the ball in the opposite left small field play, only then the point will be played.
Who are they missed the field, or is the ball in the net, get a second serve.
How to score:
To win a game, you have to win two sets. A game consists of four points. counting in the game 15,30,40.
Have the score 40:40 is called “Deuce” to win in two deuce points Weden made.
Beste Antwort:
Answer by La Doña
Hi, Üäää Üäää. I am in San Marcos, California, USA. We are nine hours behind Germany. So, if it took long to get back to you, I appologize. First of all, I would like to let you know that I think your English is very good. You are at the basic English level, so it is reasonable to expect a few mistakes. You have to translate from German to English, which is often the problem that foreign speakers have. To make editing easier, I copied and pasted your entire text and worked from there. I do not want you to think that you got it all wrong. You did an excellent job! Having said that, here is your edited essay:
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Hello, my name is_________. I’m 14 years old and my birthday is March 29, 1996.
I come from Turkey and live with my family in_______________. I’m a student at __________ Middle School. My favorite subjects are Math, Art, Physical Education and German.
My family:
My mother is 42 years old, she works at a flower shop. My sister is 22 years old, and she is training in Hotel Management. My father is 45 years old and he works at Daimler. I have a dog, whose name is Jimmy. I have had Jimmy since he was a puppy. He is now 4 years old and still very playful. He loves to run in the mornings and evenings.
Every summer my family and I travel to other countries. We love to hike and to sight see other cities. We have been to Spain, Italy and Turkey. My grandparents, aunts and uncles live in Turkey.
Hobbies and sports:
My hobbies include playing tennis, reading books and walking my dog. This is how tennis is played: The match takes place on a tennis court. When we play a single match, we play on a smaller field. When we play a double match, we play on a big field. The game begins with the impact. You have the ball in the opposite left, small playing field. It is only then, that the point will be played. The one who misses the field, or gets the ball in the net, gets a second serve.
How to score:
To win a game, you have to win two sets. A game consists of four points. counting in the game is 15,30,40. Having the score 40:40 is called “Deuce”. A player must win two deuce points to win the game.
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NOTES:
1. Dates in English are written as: Month, Day and Year.
2. Remember to capitalize the names of persons, places and class subjects: Each letter of the name of your school; class subjects as in Math, Art, and Physical Education (Sport) ….
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